A Precious Smile Poem by Ahvana Dutt

A Precious Smile

Rating: 4.8


My special brother, Noel hit the ball
An uppish forehand on the wall
And Woosh! ! it flew above th
Oh noooooooooo! shouted he
and rushed to the other side
but when he got there,
The ball was nowhere

Spotting the ball in the green house
Noel looked about in distress
Suddenly catching sight of a guard

He ran to him
Asking him for the keys
There was no key!

The guards face lit up with kindness
He really wanted to give Noel happiness
So he got into action
To end Noel's tension

Climbing over the gigantic gate
The ball was then retrieved
Thank you! thank you!
My brother screamed
And no one could stop him from hugging the guard

A smile so pure made it worth all,
Said the kind old guard warmly

I think and wonder even today
Why is it that some people's smile
Is so precious
That you want to run a mile for them.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A smile can be such a powerful thing. Very nice inductive poem.Keep writing.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 02 June 2008

Why is it that some people's smile Is so precious.............................................that is speciality by the man when so pure with noblest soul like an angel resources from heave, lovely poem by the story of purity,10+, thanks fotr sharing

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