A Pregnant Thought .....0 Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

A Pregnant Thought .....0

Rating: 4.8


AUR love has turned to
stink, the colors has faded
to black, white, and pink.
NO beginning, no end, just
pack up and go.AMEN.
AUR love has turned into
a empty bottle of wine.
NO beginning, no end, just
pack up your stuff, and be
done with it.AMEN

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APPEARS TO BE A SAD TALE OF LOVE PACKAGED IN HERE...NICE WORK...'''''''''''''''FRANK

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***** ********* 22 January 2006

Oh dear oh dear oh dear David! Things may look better in the morning, is all I can think to say. 9 from Tai anyway cus it had a good flow, even if it was straight down hill! lol

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