The sunshine and rain.
The hills and plains.
The moon and stars.
The wisdom of it all.
The shadow of sin.
The doubts and fears.
The jesters and kings
spiting in the wind.
YOU DO PAINT A NICE VERSE THERE, DAVID...TWAS'BOUT18 THEN...AND A FIRESTORM OF TROUBLE....STILL AN lol...10 FOR OUR GOOD OLE' DAYSI N THE SUN, OR UNDER THE MOON, WHICHEVER WORKED BETTER, EH? ...A TEN FOR OLE' TIMES''''''''''''''''''FRANK
Impact felt.a jumble of images brought together and tied with a bow. Well done.
Intriguing.... Lots of fleeting images, in many ways similar to 'God Bless America', but conveying a different sentiment. Like it.
As my father so profoundly says about life...'Nobody gets a free ride' I think that this tells so much of what he means by this Love duncan X
Succinct juxtapositions here. Cleverly crafted, utterly appropriate beating rhythm. t x
Hi David this was really good, I love this small poem. It was fun and light to read. You have good imagery and excellent rhyme stanza. Take care.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I wanted to thank you for your advice....and yes, recently I have opened the door for one more try.