Sunshine Poems: 387 / 500

1976

Rating: 5.0

The sunshine and rain.
The hills and plains.
The moon and stars.
The wisdom of it all.
The shadow of sin.
The doubts and fears.
The jesters and kings
spiting in the wind.

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YOU DO PAINT A NICE VERSE THERE, DAVID...TWAS'BOUT18 THEN...AND A FIRESTORM OF TROUBLE....STILL AN lol...10 FOR OUR GOOD OLE' DAYSI N THE SUN, OR UNDER THE MOON, WHICHEVER WORKED BETTER, EH? ...A TEN FOR OLE' TIMES''''''''''''''''''FRANK

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Mary Nagy 18 February 2005

I wanted to thank you for your advice....and yes, recently I have opened the door for one more try.

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Angela Barker 13 September 2007

Impact felt.a jumble of images brought together and tied with a bow. Well done.

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Chris Mendros 06 March 2007

Intriguing.... Lots of fleeting images, in many ways similar to 'God Bless America', but conveying a different sentiment. Like it.

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Duncan Wyllie 22 February 2007

As my father so profoundly says about life...'Nobody gets a free ride' I think that this tells so much of what he means by this Love duncan X

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Succinct juxtapositions here. Cleverly crafted, utterly appropriate beating rhythm. t x

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Ruby Root 06 July 2006

Hi David this was really good, I love this small poem. It was fun and light to read. You have good imagery and excellent rhyme stanza. Take care.

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