Hans Preciado

Rookie - 20 Points (Tuesday February 4th,2008 20: 36 pm / Chula Vista, California)

A Promise - Poem by Hans Preciado

Remember that first day you told someone you would?
That fake Promise?
Or just another 'To Do'

Make this of no error, for we, not I,
Are to make that difference, to change
Not to make,
For we too must know that
Change is not complete once we create the change,
But how can he who creates a change
Can do this if no one can create but only transform?

This leaves us thinking of the obvious...
Are we to change or to transform? ,
Because as it very denotation describes,
It is to something modify permanently, and to deform is not.

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Comments about A Promise by Hans Preciado

  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (4/10/2008 6:09:00 PM)

    a promise is not a broken promises...yeah you're absolutely right pal.....keep going bro.......... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 6, 2008

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