A promise
A star, a planet
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bitter feelings shared...forceful way of poem telling i must say...a ruby rob...a rout...well, Mosumi...i think the poem tries to tell more than it can hold inside its lines...aweful write 10
the gleams of light falling upon the green blood when riffles through the time and space it flows yet with joy and sorrow hand in hand onto the last day across last word the story yet untold..................wonderful poem ingenious with the imagery by the life.superb write,10++, thanks for sharing
Wonderful poem..maam...a bit over my head...but enjoyed it still.....loved the way of rendition..as an indifferent silent observer...thanks.