A Real Fantasy Poem by Paul F. Ernst

A Real Fantasy

Rating: 3.0


A lovely lady danced upon a stage
Her limber body moved with grace and rage
Beware! Each warming movement seems uncouth
As she unveils that flower of shapely youth
A flirting smile enhanced her sensuous eyes
Which brought the burlesque show alive
To guys she beckoned with festive gaiety
A dream so valued by laity
The teasing dancer's subtle scheme has won
And after that the passion plot is done

Thursday, January 2, 2003
Topic(s) of this poem: fantasy,flower,passion,teasing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
William Jackson 23 November 2007

Outside of anger the dancing seductress has no internal life, and she uses her body as a snare of enticement to get what she wants from equally shallow men. I like the rhyming at the end of each line. The poem is nicely crafted. Well done.

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Paul F. Ernst

Paul F. Ernst

Cincinnati, Ohio, USA
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