Wednesday, December 23, 2015

A Rose's Journey Comments

Rating: 5.0

Compromising essence
A rose tattered by the wind
Crying for the purity of silence
As the air screams in chaos
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James Darwin Smith II
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Unwritten Soul 23 December 2015

Lovely, i can get the words and imagination, and believe or not James, it kinda remind me about my past poem-Desert Rose..but the way you write it is somewhere bigger than the ocean :)

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James Darwin Smith II

James Darwin Smith II

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