Monday, July 28, 2008
A Roses' Petal Comments
Rating: ★3.0
To walk the petal of a rose,
on a coffin under a tombstone.
Would mean to have walked the halls of the otherside,
yet still here above ground.
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Dawson Walter Smith
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2/26/2026 8:34:04 PM # 1.0.0
Dawson, I like the content of your poem. I've thought about this myself. To leave not done, With what was started. Would be the saddest way, One could have departed. I feel these lines are somewhat cliche - the rhyme between 'started' and 'departed.' And sing-song. Also you spelled cemetery wrong. This has the potential of being a great poem. Put it away and come back to it fresh.