Tuesday, March 20, 2012

A Runner's Life Comments

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At the first glimpse of sunlight,
We hit the trails,
There are no rules to follow,
No barriers or rails,
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Maddy Rose
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 20 March 2012

Welcome to PH. I like to run or casually walking around. I can feel your poem, why didn't you add in the pain that we feel in the beginning of running? It must have added some spice to the poem. Well written and Energetic. Come on, Let us run together to nowhere!

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