Monday, January 16, 2012
A Sad End Comments
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With my pike I swing away,
For it is my enemy I have to slay,
I do not wish to die in war,
For it is filled, with blood and gore.
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Jean-luc Le Maistre
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Jean-luc Le Maistre
16 January 2012
please don't judge too harshly this is my first ever poem, I would appreciate if you gave me tips, hints or grammar correction
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2/28/2026 2:43:08 AM # 1.0.0
Like it, for your first poem its very very good. A great write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, The Corrupt.