A Savage Embrace Poem by Louise Tredoux

A Savage Embrace

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Thank you for your e-mail message, oh Rudi,
do you think I love you less? When you’re on
the boat, many duties, loving the creatures
of the sea you work with, so much to occupy
you, while I’m sitting here, with so much less
responsibility, dreaming of you, thinking of
you, only the voice of Juliette accompanying
my thoughts, oh Rudi, when you explained you
long for me near, I imagined our Wiedersehen,
imagined you crushing my body to yours, kissing
me so passionately, I nearly lose consciousness

I saw visions of your eyes boring into mine, con-
veying the messages you sent electronically,
I visualized so much, I felt your touch, for a few
magical moments we were united, you and I,
in a savage embrace, fuelled by a longing so
deep, we could not sustain tenderness, you
savagely ravishing me and my soul so responsive,
so happy in passion overflowing, oh Rudi, your
words are burning in me, your enunciations have
become letters cast in fire, burning my soul,
scalding my heart, a hallucination of nuclear
fission, never to be split apart again, oh Rudi...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Larry Stevens 27 November 2008

The depths of your ability to feel are profound, this picture of passion

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