A Silly Mistake Poem by susette varga

A Silly Mistake

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Just when i felt secure with you
You pulled the rug from beneath me feet
A silly mistake was all it took
I cannot win no matter what i do

Constantly judged
Tested too
What on earth is wrong with you?

Why is it so hard for you to accept
I am only human with flaws like you
Why unable are you to embrace
My faults as well as my good?

You seem to forget i am not your ex
All that i do is for both our sakes
You know i am selfless my heart is true
Why so impossible to get through to you?

Sunday, March 4, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: judgement
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 21 March 2018

You seem to forget i am not your ex................this is my favorite line of the poem. i have 3 ex's but don't hate any of them! Why unable are you to embrace...........i kind of like your word arrangement, but it is strange to read this way, rather than: Why are you unable to embrace (to be continued) ..........

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