A Single Tear. Poem by Tammie LilAimo

A Single Tear.

Rating: 5.0


I'm sitting in class watching the time go by,
I'm waiting for the boy opposite me to see eye to eye.
I'm feeling a single tear run down my cheeck,
As im waiting for him to turn and speak.

Whose voice I desire aloud with mine
i await for him to call me on a private line.
but all these lines are in my head,
all the signs i have miss read.

but this single tear is all i have left.
which reminds me off a cry of theft.
This single Tear rolls away
which lead my broken heart astray.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is about a time when i was in class thinking about a boy i had liked for a long time, but he is not the one for me.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandy Player 16 December 2012

This poem stands out from your others(or rather the ones I have read): it moves at a calmer tempo. Pleasant to the ear too, the words consist mostly of soft letters, though inevitably, there are harsher syllables. A good one-cheers

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Karen Sinclair 18 June 2012

there i one typo... hope you dont mind and i make more than my fair share cheek..

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Karen Sinclair 18 June 2012

such a sweet and innocent look on the first flutters of love... adorable and well written too.. tyvm karen

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