(c) Colorofsky

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A Slight Breeze - Poem by (c) Colorofsky

A slight breeze,
rattled a loose door,
going to the outside.

Moved it with,
unseen wafting fingers,
as if it were animate, alive.

A bit surprised,
did shake my nerves,
just a split second of unease.

But then I laughed
on the inside, knowing,
It was only, a slight breeze.


Comments about A Slight Breeze by (c) Colorofsky

  • (5/20/2005 9:09:00 PM)

    The momentary fear experienced when the seemingly unexplained occurs is conveyed very well in this piece. Then the relief, upon realizing that there was nothing sinister occurring. Excellent imagery, and the poem flowed and rhymed well. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 20, 2005

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 24, 2005


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