A Smile Poem by Uddhab Naik

A Smile



It was a time when life seemed to me
a Heavy stone on my skinny back
It had no reasons to crawl more.
It had no space to bring HOPE.


Day after Day I was drowning
Into the never ending thoughts
Neither a friend nor a foe
Was ready to see me blooming.


Before the last Breathe
I saw her coming wearing a Smile.
It brought me back the happy hours
And gave me strength to stand again.

Tuesday, April 17, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: liberty,life,love and friendship,love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nika Mcguin 17 April 2018

Nicely done, you can tell the speaker here feels truly saved by her smile. Theres a feeling of hushed relief that reverberates towards the end of the poem.

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