In the mirror, a fractured soul stares back
In shards of silvered glass, my reflections crack
All the pains and scars are left to bare
Exposed to the world, yet hidden from care
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If I might be able to supply answers to any questions about this site, which has had its 'ups and downs', feel free to ask me. bri : )
I like your PH name, and I read your brief bio here. It appears (that) you only have one poem so far on PH. So I assume you are new to this site.
It sounds like/as if/as though SOMEONE has a big problem! ! ! I assume 'wave is used figuratively for a water wave, and is not at all meaning a goodbye or hello wave made by one's hand. : )
"Bear" and "bare" are homophones, meaning they sound alike but have different meanings: Bear A verb that means to carry, support, endure, or tolerate something. For example, you can 'bear responsibility' or 'bear fruit'. You can also use 'bear' as a noun to refer to the animal.' (cont.)
'All the pains and scars are left to bare Exposed to the world, yet hidden from care' RoRo, I THINK the word you 'want' to use is 'bear', not 'bare'. OR..DELETE 'to' from in front of 'bare'. (cont.) (cont.)
Beautiful