A stranger wid a studious luk
A specs, A beard, And a serious face
So Intelligent bt nvr had a buk
so calm and quite in evry case
First a stranger den a frnd
became a bestfriend and finally a lover
The man wid few words
Used to keep his feelings covered..
The guy Was a paradox
Wore a watch bt never on time
He ws shy But daring.
Quite but gives grt lessons
was Sociable bt enjoyed his own presence
The Guy wid Great heart
Gave His heart to his lover
Wid his typical nature
her lyf got tougher..
She Got Irritated
for mostly he ws quite...
Though he truely loved her
She left her inspite..
He was Broken But cudnt express
wid regretion in his heart
for he cant impress his princess
She Got Irritated for mostly he ws quite... Though he truely loved her She left her inspite.. It would have a great impression at the first read like the love at the first sight, had you taken a little pain of typing the full words, in stead you loved to use the SMS format. Of course you have full liberty of giving any kind of distortion to your personal creation. Still it hurts. A beautiful daughter behind an ugly mask. However I loved the essence of this great poem. Please do not feel hurt for my comments.10 for the poem. Subhas.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I agree with Subhas. Keep writing, Aditi