A summer shower cools the day
As a rainbow paints the sky
I watch the clouds high above
As they drift on by
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When the reader can picture and feel what the writer is describing, then that is the mark of a successful poet. You have achieved that with this poem, by conveying the impression of raindrops on my skin, and clouds in motion. Bravo, Ray! : -)
Thank you Practicing Poetess for your very kind words.
U.R. Welcome. Anytime! : -)