Saturday, November 10, 2018

A Summer Rain Comments

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A summer shower cools the day
As a rainbow paints the sky
I watch the clouds high above
As they drift on by
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Ray Hansell
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Ray Hansell 14 November 2018

Thank you Practicing Poetess for your very kind words.

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Practicing Poetess 14 November 2018

U.R. Welcome. Anytime! : -)

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Practicing Poetess 14 November 2018

When the reader can picture and feel what the writer is describing, then that is the mark of a successful poet. You have achieved that with this poem, by conveying the impression of raindrops on my skin, and clouds in motion. Bravo, Ray! : -)

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