Monday, July 21, 2014

A Summer's Past Comments

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It was a hot summer night in the middle of June,
The radio was playing our favorite tune.
Laying on a blanket looking up at the sky,
There I got lost in your big blue eyes.
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Matthew Buck
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Adeline Foster 21 July 2014

This is a pretty-good love poem. Please read mine - Love's Diamond - Adeline May I point out that dirty-blonde is too harsh for a love term. Why not use honey-blonde?

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