Monday, January 14, 2008

A Sunset By A Lake-Side (Alternate Rhyming) Comments

Rating: 5.0

The golden coat in the sky
Turned the rest so dark,
When reflected in the water
The lake was ignited with sparks.
...
Read full text

Jyoti Sunit Chaudhary
COMMENTS
Dannnielle Bratt 22 May 2008

I really like the way that this peom flowed you are so gifted in your writing you should defently be an author

0 2 Reply
Subbaraman N V 29 March 2008

Beautiful presentation of the routine!

0 1 Reply
Jyoti Sunit Chaudhary

Jyoti Sunit Chaudhary

Madhubani, Bihar, India
Close
Error Success