A (Sur) Real Moment Poem by indira babbellapati

A (Sur) Real Moment



The door closed
On its own
Outside, the drizzle
Gained momentum
But don't they say
One who comes with rain
Will stay for the night?

I heard destiny's feet
Trampling on the void...

Thursday, February 28, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: destiny
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shahzia Batool 28 February 2013

Very tricky title Indira ji, yes, most of the times we feel unable to distinguish between a real and a surreal moment...the parenthesis offered the same confusion...

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visakhapatnam, india
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