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Rating: 2.7

there's the sea
there's the sky
the moon and the wind too
a picture perfect setting
for you and i
but
you aren't you
i'm not i

inheritors of the promordial fire

we're just the carriers of the
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Bharati Nayak 22 October 2019

there's the sea there's the sky the moon and the wind too a picture perfect setting for you and i but you aren't you i'm not i inheritors of the promordial fire we're just the carriers of the principle that governs nature - - - - - - - -A wonderful poem of love and nature.We are governed by the forces of nature.

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 June 2016

The mystics of life! Thanks for sharing.

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Prateep Sengupta 15 July 2010

The second and the last stanzas are marvellous. The inevitable trends of live have been effectively implied.

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Gita Ashok 06 July 2010

the elements will never cease the fire will keep burning but you'll not be you and i'll not be i Wonderful and thought-provoking lines!

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Rachel Butler 23 June 2010

'to reach that fleeting moment of non-existence' Rachel Ann Butler

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extremly well and well appealing. marks 10

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Nimal Dunuhinga 19 June 2010

Perfect.! ...........under one roof two chracters live as one but there are two souls?

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Sandra Fowler 17 June 2010

While it is true that there is nothing new under the sun, this is a very compelling piece of work. Excellent, Indira. Love, Sandra

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:) . and one thing is diffinite about me, God breathe life into me. :) . the rest, the flesh is belongs to the universe. but that soul of mine, is the lords.. :) . the poem has some truth. :) . the carbon is you may have been shared by einstein or newton, or King Solomon. :)

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