Thursday, September 3, 2009

A Swimmer And A Crocodile Comments

Rating: 5.0

He wants to cross the river
But the ferryman is nowhere
The notice says Crocodiles and beware!
Swimmer in a clue.
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nimal dunuhinga
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Alison Cassidy 04 September 2009

An interesting 'take' on an old fable. What a wise swimmer you show us here, Nimal. He will not be fooled by Mr. Wily Crock, however tired he may be. Clever and witty. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 03 September 2009

Those crocodile tears are not to be trusted. An interesting fable, very well written. Always your friend at poemhunter, Sandra

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