Friday, September 11, 2009

A Thousand Miles Of Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

It was a rainy day today,
After the hot sunshine
Baked painfully across our backs
In the afternoon
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Dosvedanya Rashia
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Adeline Foster 08 February 2013

Great title. Read mine - Mitigation - Adeline

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Bryan Alexander 25 September 2009

I love lines about a festival for god being rained out. And the rest of the imagery is great. this is a very good write.....

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Surya . 11 September 2009

realy a nice poem.touched my heart.you have a way with words.thanx for sharing. voted10 surya

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Luwi Habte 11 September 2009

Oh! what a poem! so very nice, heart touch... i love it Luwi

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Keith Hendrickson 11 September 2009

''with the peace of doves and hope that the morning often brings i will walk again, leaving my pasos behind'' its lines like that that seperate you from an average writer. deep soulfulllll words flow from your head and through your pen... amazing piece

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