It was a rainy day today,
After the hot sunshine
Baked painfully across our backs
In the afternoon
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I love lines about a festival for god being rained out. And the rest of the imagery is great. this is a very good write.....
realy a nice poem.touched my heart.you have a way with words.thanx for sharing. voted10 surya
''with the peace of doves and hope that the morning often brings i will walk again, leaving my pasos behind'' its lines like that that seperate you from an average writer. deep soulfulllll words flow from your head and through your pen... amazing piece
Great title. Read mine - Mitigation - Adeline