A Tiny Thread Poem by Doris Cornago

A Tiny Thread

Rating: 5.0


A lilac leaf floated on verdant glass
On its surface glistening drops
Flirted with gusts of wind
Breath suspended
On a tiny
Thread
Awaiting
A word, two
Or more, every
Morning, but none
Came, just a growl from
Half opened lips, tiresome
Tiredness of a man collecting
Memories with dots, knots, plots
Brown lays the future, nothing more..

A Tiny Thread
Sunday, September 10, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: despise,despondent,perception,perspective
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A man is not a woman, and oftentimes cannot feel as deeply as a woman. A woman hopes for so much more and she may express this in a veiled language but the man is unresponsive, not getting the complaint but will preach about general things to the audience, ignoring the message. Can anything be resolved if a man and woman walk different planes of perception? A leaf looks green to a man, nothing more; a woman sees it as lilac.
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