A True Mother You Are Comments

True, some of us don't value our parents like we value our boyfriends and girlfriends. we forget that, we are what we are today because of these people. if they didn't love and care for us we wouldn't be where we are today. but that said, I think the poem could have been better than what it is now, with more imagery and deepness had you used words that are not usually used and phrases, its just my opinion, I may be wrong but still I enjoyed reading it. Siya