Friday, June 2, 2017

A Twilight Adieu Comments

Rating: 4.5

Across the lake,
In the sea of sands
A soothing lazy breeze
Plays with a sandy-hued lock of hair
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Seemeen Khan Yousufzai
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Dr Antony Theodore 03 June 2017

And the sun winks at the eyes Through the clouds As a final goodbye for the day And the eyes crinkle at the corners Lighting up as the sun lights up the sky, beautiful poem and very poetic....... you have the heart of a great poetess and artist... God bless u for this poem.. tony

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Thank you very much for such a wonderful comment and taking the time out to read it. Much indebted.

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Jazib Kamalvi 02 June 2017

A nice combination of light, colour and passion. Thanks

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Thank you.

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