Thursday, May 3, 2007

A Vision Comments

Rating: 4.0

Itching to get out
is a vision.
a vision I see
in every midnight's dream,
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Melissa Joy Chesky
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Greenwolfe 1962 29 June 2008

This poem is a little more focused in content and it has a better flow to it. It is not a lot better than the first but I do recommend it. GW62

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Melissa Joy Chesky

Melissa Joy Chesky

Edina, MN
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