Saturday, December 5, 2015

A Walk Comments

Rating: 5.0

Winter turns leaves swish
Like corn flakes kicked around,
Frosted paths moistened by the snow.
Straight stark trees,
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Ian Keenan
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Dr Antony Theodore 06 January 2016

The dog barks, Squirrels run, A train throws back The shouts of children; Your small hand warms Beneath my shirt. Such beautiful expressions of l ove. and nature. thank you. tony

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Unwritten Soul 07 December 2015

Ian, definitely a gorgeous poem here, i like you pull readers mind (well at least it works for me) when you tell the story i felt like i am experiencing it...well done! ! loved it

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