A Way Out? Poem by Chey King

A Way Out?

Rating: 4.3


Which way would I go?
Who else would be there,
But my bold, unbreakable foe?

I wish I could have hope
But that was stripped from me
When they tore at my heart because I wouldn't give them the key

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chey King 04 June 2009

this is not my best work it was written in response to a comment I got on another poem (Nothing In My Heart) and in about 5 min. So sorry if this poem confuses anyone... or if any of you think its horrible.

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Sara Tehrani 04 June 2009

i like it...its really quick and witty and got a nice flow to it. its simple yet affective. oh if u fancy ready sum new poems, check mine out and all comments welcome :)

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