Thursday, February 5, 2009

A Wayfarer Seeks His Ancestors In A Tombless Graveyard Comments

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Poverty ornamental brewing soul walks in the Pepper tree lane
And a far away tall chimney carries off smoke to the wistful sky
Like his wistful thinking.
Hardly he got into an omnipotent bus that goes to an unreal destiny.
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nimal dunuhinga
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Alison Cassidy 06 February 2009

Your poem captures the feel of angst and melancholy where the wayfarer dreams in the windswept graveyard. I too would be happy to see Susan posting again. She is a fine poet - like the author of this poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 05 February 2009

Nice imagery in this one. I like the wistful chimney smoke. It would be nice to know that Susie is posting here again. Take care. Kind regards, Sandra

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