Sunday, April 26, 2009

A Whisper Comments

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My pale skin seems even more bare
I’ll take your hand and touch me there
Reaching down underneath
My clothes your hands are beneath
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Maggie lll
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Vishal Sharma 24 April 2014

There is a lovely play with words which adds to a wonderful flow here. pastel shades wrap her in soothing songs time melts away and she slips through the layers of her cotton covered losses. My favorite: great use of imagery, well done!

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Freewill Amon 05 January 2013

This is a sexy, naughty, poem. I feel like going wild right now

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