Sunday, August 18, 2013

A Wicked Cloud Comments

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Come lay your head on my cloud,
It wont rain.
Unless you make it so.

Clear skies; not a shroud,
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Raekwon Jones
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Mohabeer Beeharry 18 August 2013

If I only can rest my head on your cloud I would be safe. Nothing would dislodge me from there. But its only a cloud Beautiful. I like it. Mohabeer Beeharry Read my poems sometimes,

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Dave Walker 18 August 2013

A great poem, like it, a great write.

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