Saturday, June 7, 2008

A Window In Time Comments

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Alone, a deserted beach.
Calm and breathless.
Silent, save for the gentle murmuring of water as it hugs the shore,
A familiar embrace sounds.
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Kel Smith
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Greenwolfe 1962 02 July 2008

Again, I'm not sure what this is. The title is a clue I suppose. If that is what it is, then it is a moving picture description of a beach somewhere. That is interesting. The writer sure is an observer of great detail. As to what it means in the grand scheme of things, we shall have to await further revelations. GW62

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nice one kel smith good one

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Tiffanie Lau 08 June 2008

beautiful words you have there. =) loved especially: //Calm and breathless. and your 4th stanza. also like how you seamlessly move from one stanza to the next! thanks for sharing..

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