Tuesday, October 7, 2008

A Word Or Two Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I'm old and wrinkly
in the future someday
will someone write me a poem
Saying how wonderful I look today
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JoJo Bean, Dodgy Dave and Meggie Gultiano
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Arnold Dilley 17 October 2008

a nice combination of three talented poets.Good job

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Alison Cassidy 11 October 2008

From time to time, I think we all reflect on what our older years might be like. I remember my dear old mum saying (at the tender age of 84) 'I feel just the same inside you know dear.' Yes, a kind words never goes astray, no matter how old the recipient. A gentle reflective piece from three of a kind. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 07 October 2008

A kind word or two can make all the difference. Very nice. A ten for all three of you. Warm regards, Sandra

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Thad Wilk 07 October 2008

When you get old an' gray one day I'll write you a poem an' in it will say You look just as wonderful As you did 'back then'! For age doesn't matter to me An' i will always be - to thee Your friend - till th' end ! ! *10*! ! Thad

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