Monday, March 9, 2009

A World Of Silence (Song) Comments

Rating: 3.5

Quietly flowing
White
Dried clouds pass by
The gray me
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annie tuck
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Mark R Slaughter 11 March 2009

Building a sand castle from stars is a great metaphor. Annie you should try a poem around that. Again, lyrics are just part of a song so can't comment on your final work. Do you intend posting songs on Youtube? Could be a way of getting comments on your whole creation. Mark

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