I learned a great fact yesterday...
To pen a poem, the rhythm and rhyme
Should not such an importance play
But deep down meaning is the key
‘Twas yes! the essence of the poem
Not AABB nor ABAB
(The stuttering insect: A, a, bee, bee!
Or the panicked child: A bee! A bee!)
The poem I read that antecedes?
I'm on a journey, and much, much more
A country town, a country house
A store abandoned years before
And at the journey's fateful end
A grandma's diary had been found
Her long life's story explored therein
And when the reading was complete
(The story led to a vision rare)
I had, myself, a will to meet
The ‘gramma' with her lovely face
And her life's story, her address
That were discovered in that place
So even though there may be rhyme
In my attempt to replicate
A poem cleffed at an earlier time
My hope is that a meaning clear
Will be discerned and understood
By all those reading, and poem(book) worms near
I'll concentrate now from this time
More on the essence of the poem
Than on the rhythm and the rhyme
My gratefulness today is giv'n
To a new friend not found afar
But found right here, in my poem's heaven
MsSmith I hope that you will see
Your poem affected not just others
But left a greater mark on me!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Well done. Nothing wrong with rhyme; it helps the poem to 'swing along'. Rhyme brings music to poetry. Blank verse and free verse is nothing but an excuse for sloppiness.
I agree that it certainly keeps the poem 'swinging along', and they can be fun to read, but my ideal is to have both...a poem that 'swings' and one that inspires or has meaning.