Rachel BaByBeAr Anderson

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Abandoned - Poem by Rachel BaByBeAr Anderson

I cant breath
the air cuts my lungs
rips my mind
I've lost him
no more spiralling words
no more feelings
I've gone numb
and nothing can wake me up
I miss him
I cant think
cant stand it
this lonelyness slicing through me
I want it to end
I want him back
I need him to know
that I love him
and want to make everything better
but I cant
no contact now
a clean cut
ready for the lemonjuice to sting
dissolving the stitches that he'd placed
heart breaking once more
this time no-one can heal it
its dead for good
and nothing can help me anymore


Comments about Abandoned by Rachel BaByBeAr Anderson

  • (12/28/2009 7:11:00 AM)


    Sorrowful yet brilliant. A-Star! ;) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 2, 2009



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