Rachel BaByBeAr Anderson

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Broken - Poem by Rachel BaByBeAr Anderson

She's sitting here crying
every part of her is dying
Nothing left to do but cry some more
Just lay there with wet eyes on the floor
Staring endlessly at the damp fabric
She's been crying so much its making her sick
But what can she do?
They've all gone and turned their backs on her
Something everyone knows she doesnt deserve
I wish I could help her
Wish I could make her feel better
But she just sits there looking a mess
Making me feel useless
To her I am
What can I do but make her smile a while
She's been treated too badly to be put right again
Too much heartbreak there
So much damage that cant be fixed
Torn and broken so many times
Theres nothing that can heal her dying heart


Comments about Broken by Rachel BaByBeAr Anderson

  • (3/15/2010 5:20:00 AM)


    i cn see the pain behind the words
    nicly written i hope to read more wonderful poems
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  • (12/26/2009 6:53:00 PM)


    A very good poem.10/10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 26, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, December 27, 2009


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