s./j. goldner

Rookie (March 2nd,1984 / USA)

Absurditty - Poem by s./j. goldner

Great passion
confined
To a small area.

Inversely
proportional
To infinity.


Comments about Absurditty by s./j. goldner

  • (1/19/2009 11:04:00 AM)


    creativity is something that produce joy perennial.......this pce seems enchanting..
    rgrds/salu
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  • Jon Alan (9/24/2007 3:01:00 PM)


    WOW - a mathematician poet, like myself - your equation/poem is remarkable - I voted it a 10 - it is a perfect observation, one that puts you into the realm of the adepts of esoteric orders of divine orders of the sufi scientists! (Report) Reply

  • (9/9/2007 1:41:00 PM)


    I never knew that there
    could be something better than
    Webster's Dictionary
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  • (7/4/2007 11:41:00 PM)


    You made a vague thing become clear to our understanding with vivid defination! Great talent.Thanks for sharing. Top marks. (Report) Reply

  • (6/20/2007 3:43:00 PM)


    I love your ability to condense so much meaning and feeling into verse. Very powerful. (Report) Reply

  • (4/13/2007 11:29:00 PM)


    Great poem! You said so much with so little. You have a unique style of writing that makes your poetry memorable. I give it a ten!
    -Michael
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  • (3/14/2007 6:43:00 PM)


    I pitty
    the city
    that your
    little ditty
    being
    most iffy
    is found.
    but i'll
    give it
    ten as
    a bribe!
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  • Tailor Bell (11/23/2006 1:18:00 PM)


    love the inverse proportion. nifty ditty, Sus. -Tailor (Report) Reply

  • (9/21/2006 10:00:00 AM)


    Nicey nice wee ditty.; -) (Report) Reply

  • (8/22/2006 8:49:00 PM)


    Goldy Locks teach me how to put so much in so little.......great rite.. (Report) Reply

  • (7/1/2006 10:10:00 PM)


    how did i miss you on PH? ...and you do pack an atom bomb into a poem as small as an atom! ! ! ...loved it...nalini (Report) Reply

  • (5/30/2006 8:42:00 PM)


    mmm I love it when people use images of infinity...I love your work..and even moreso, I think it's interesting that you'd have a picture of Edna St. Vincent Millay on your biography page, once, long ago I used that very picture as a background for my poetry, or another site...I guess you could say, great minds think alike? I can't wait to see what you're writing when you get to poets like Anna Akhmatova...Pen on dear girl!
    Always,
    Amberlee
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  • (5/30/2006 1:19:00 AM)


    the science here is all proportional, alot of creativity described here, nice job sus. (Report) Reply

  • (5/29/2006 6:47:00 AM)


    Well,
    a few words and a lot of meaning....... Well done

    Anjana
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  • (5/28/2006 11:58:00 AM)


    Susan, very neat and clever.
    Regards,
    Ian
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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (5/24/2006 2:50:00 AM)


    SUS...ITS LIKE THE ANCIENT CLICHE: BIG THINGS COME IN SMALL PACKAGES...THIS WORK SMACKS OF THE STRAIGHT-FORWARD/ POINT-IN A-LINE MASTERESS YOU'VE BECOME...JOB WELL DONE, SUS!

    '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''~F. J. R.~''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''
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  • (5/23/2006 6:41:00 PM)


    1) I loved the title, even before I'd read the poem
    2) Have you been studying quantum physics and cosmology lately?
    3) Emily Dickinson would be jealous of how much you packed into a few lines
    4) I really loved the poem!
    5) You really came to the point.
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  • (5/23/2006 12:47:00 PM)


    These six lines are like two trembling balls of compressed gravity. Nice minimalism: -) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 23, 2006

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 23, 2006


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