Achilles' Heel....! ! ! Poem by true little angel
Achilles' Heel....! ! !
a hole in a strong wall
or an achilles heel i can call
the flood knows that very well
so no need to fight each cell
every night it sends a dropp to spy about it
to see if it's still strong and fit
it wants to know the time to attack
and now it's ready not to move back
the wall got fragile, so infiltrate!
dont wait
whack!
bring its fate
the wall fell down
on mud of brown
announcing that: (by a small hole it lost its crown) ! ! ! !
h(ªn) ².......... true little angel©.....
I see a beautiful style, here and a tender creative soul that will surprise me for sure! !
A beautiful poem referring to Greek mythology of Trojan war. Really good one, true little angel......A definite 10. Best Wishes Naseer
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/24/2024 12:04:59 AM # 1.0.0.1119
very nice work and style i like it