true little angel
the words world

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Rating: 4.8
two thousands and nine
i will never be fine
no heart's warm or kind
nowhere good i can find
to live in
with no sin

even you
you were a dream
sweet dream....
but wasnt true

two thousands and nine
they said: 'happy new year'
but no sign
of happiness here...

even though,
my best wishes
for you dear
i hope you are fine.....
Wednesday, January 28, 2009
Well organised ideas, this is a good poem.
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Iron Panda 23™ 02 March 2010
beautifully written! !
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this is an amazing poem i can tell that there is a lot of motion in this
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Jerry Hughes 29 September 2009
I understand why you used the title now, you shouldn't have sent it, it's terrible. However, cheers, Jerry
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Elias Galvez 19 August 2009
sweey lil poem. short candid and sweet-you are true poetess
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ata khan 17 April 2009
Poignant, but still with a sweet ending. I really like the last stanza. Thanks for sharing.
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Alma Cortez 06 March 2009
Beautiful sounds like ur broken but still in love
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it would a great year for you. Read my piece called, bye bye, you wretch (farewell to 2008) ciao mi amiga Leslie
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Barbara Terry 28 January 2009
Even though you say that there is no love in him, you still have best wishes for him. That is what true love really is. Thank you for sharing. A 10+. Love & hugs, Barbara
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