Across Poem by Wesley Mincin

Across

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Across

Across the skies a meteor flies,
it flashes, sails, falls, then dies.
Across the ocean do sea lions swim,
they surf, they jump against the wind.
Across the skies of Antarctica,
shine various colors of Aurora.
Across the fields of snow that's white,
the wolf packs and hares blend out of sight.
Across this bridge is a paradise,
No compromises or sacrifice.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jennifer K 06 July 2010

your poem fllows beautifully. nice work

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you show life everywhere...a good flowing poem

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 22 July 2009

Across this bridge is a paradise, .......What a beautiful line, Wesley. Nice poem. Keep up the good work. Best Wishes Naseer

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Autumn Jones 21 July 2009

It is very well thought out and when I read out loud the words just jumped across my tongue like they were meant to be there. Very good. -Autumn

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last two lines are splendid............

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