Thursday, August 31, 2006

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Can't believe it's over now
My feelings I shall hide
For every time I said I love you
A part of me has died
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King Midas
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Kyle Mccoy 03 September 2006

thought this was your best piece for the DB if thats what she is to you now but dont be so hard on yourself. i fear its not the end of you two yet.

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Brian Dorn 31 August 2006

King Midas, superb melancholy write with an awesome ending line! Well done! ! Brian

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