Advice Poem by Emmanuel Ayodele

Advice

Rating: 5.0


Ok, let hear the day
The night earlier wore

Ok, let hear the Dog
That split the ancient broom

Ok, let hear the bird
That eased on the bard head

Ok, let hear the worm
That is pleased under earth

Ok, let hear the Ant
That ate your brother's bread

Ok, let hear the Sea
That swept the playful boy

Let hear the fire
That took the baby's thumb

Let hear the water
That stage the Sodom soil

Hear the voice
That tore the cedar tree

NOW, hear the LORD
The world is ending now! ! !

Thursday, March 1, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: advice
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Ok, let hear the day
The night earlier wore

Ok, let hear the Dog
That split the ancient broom

Ok, let hear the bird
That eased on the bard head

Ok, let hear the worm
That is pleased under earth

Ok, let hear the Ant
That ate your brother's bread

Ok, let hear the Sea
That swept the playful boy

Let hear the fire
That took the baby's thumb

Let hear the water
That stage the Sodom soil

Hear the voice
That tore the cedar tree

NOW, hear the LORD
The world is ending now! ! !
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 01 March 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Emmanuel. You may like to read my poem, Love And. Thank you.

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Emmanuel Ayodele

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Lagos Nigeria
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