Afloat Poem by Joe Crane

Afloat

Rating: 5.0


Behind the eyes of grey,
behind the empty smiles,
behind the laughter drawn astray,
lies a problem in denial.
Though pleasant on the surface,
one soon will come to see,
a man without a purpose,
something’s wrong with me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aftab Alam Khursheed 25 May 2013

Beautiful Afloat Joe first three lines are heart touching and the concluding line well grasped the pen keet it up future in this field to give a holy message to this earth keep and keep

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