after a night of love
you take back your arms
and you start your journey again
she is naked
as if everything is taken away from her
her soul is nowhere to be found
her body nothing but mere bones
her glances like blank walls
her words utter themselves
senselessly
her mind flies away like a bird
without the wind
Dear Suki Such an impact of exploding love and an imploding despair drives to a point the duality of any relationship.Very nice!
wow...you are amazing...most poems without rhyme do not catch my attention.. but you catch it and hold it there it is great
I have never read so much of nothing before and thought that it was so much of something to my mind.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Suki, this is a masterpiece. The love you portrayed here is a snatcher, everything, ... a form of love that really exists, though we all know that to get love, one needs to give love.. but in reality, the game is often onesided.10+++