Thursday, December 1, 2005

Aftermath Comments

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Thought, I will rule the world one day
Thought, I will rule her heart too
Thought, let me take the test
I felt it would be easy to get through
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Zombie Chow
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Impressive poem, the narrator starts out ready to rule the world, take his love, and he ends dead on the floor. Great visuals, sharp language.

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Mary Nagy 09 December 2005

I like this Zombie. Very good images here. Good poem. Sincerely, Mary

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