Again And No More Poem by tandi folliott

Again And No More

Rating: 4.3


You are the silhouette
Of happiness long lost
Over the dark backdropp of sadness

Without you
The silence is never silent
Disturbed by the shrieks
Of my forlorn heart
For you

It's been long since
I have been held captive
By darkness. By you.

I have waited long
Now I must run
And unshackle myself
From the dark alleys
Of my own arrested mind

Not to you
But away
From you
Far away

But as I run
Won't the wind
That blows in your direction
Remind me of you
Anyway
That's how the fickle wind blows
Laughing at you as you run
From everything

The birds of twilight
Of which you are one
Always deceive me
And fly into the darkness
Leaving me behind
My dreams incomplete

I wanted to fly
But you never took me along

Love
Again and no more
Never again and never more
Love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
i love u babe (tandi) 16 March 2010

this isnt my best poem: (

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John Knight 30 March 2010

Hey Angel - Don't put yourself down - this is a great poem - full of emotion and genuine teen angst. It is very dynamic and a good poem to perform at a Poetry Festival - I will sure read it at my next one. We all fall in love Angel and when our love is spurned it is hard to bear however old or young we are. When it happens we lose our Happiness (V 1) our Peace (V 2) and our Light (V 3) . In the end we give up waiting (V 4) and try to run away (V 5) . However (V 6) we find it really hard to run away form our emotions. Verse Seven is very emotive. When we are young our relationships are transient and our dreams incomplete. We want to fly (V 8) but we are left behind on the ground. Verse Nine - NEVER SAY - NEVER AGAIN! ! ! ! I love it Angel - keep writing and you will get lots of positive comment. Love in Poetry - JOHN.

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Beauty Philosophy 30 March 2010

A heart poem full of emotions. Keep writing and exteriorizing the pain you have inside.

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Saadat Tahir 07 June 2010

a sad but clarion call... nice touchy lines the last stanza...almost out of poe....amd just as dark gud effort done wel cheers

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i love u babe (tandi) 04 May 2010

thx for all ur comments

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Emma Adamyan 03 May 2010

has its special manner. has its class. u know im glad i`d faught ur nickname and came on ur page, coz it was hard fighting...

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Lady Grace 30 March 2010

nice poem..it indicates exoression of a broken heart..well, love will come unexpected..it will just come like a thief in the night..so, if it makes u sad, then, just dont mind, another love will come again and again...ur poem is nicely done..smileeeeeeee

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Irina Podgorbunskya 30 March 2010

It's so lovely poem! ! ! It's full of feelings and emotions! One can look into yourself reading it. To my mind it's right 'cause the world will be open to you then and you will be able to enjoy it! Thank you!

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