Monday, January 16, 2006

Alcohol Comments

Rating: 3.3

and here it comes
like a crack in the wall
spider cracks
creeping up an old stone building
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Daniel Edward
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Brian Jani 26 May 2014

Nice one veru complicated too

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Mary Nagy 24 February 2006

I agree that the title helps......but, I really like the intensity in this poem. Anyone that has dealt with (or been) somebody with a struggle with alcohol will surely relate to this one. Very good poem. Sincerely, Mary

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Missy Trinity Ferrari. 23 February 2006

uuummmm yeah if it werent for the title i would have absolutely no clue what this is about

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Daniel Edward

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